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Friday, 6 September 2019

nerritiv righting

Narrative is a fictional story that has a protagonist and antagonist. That is a bad guy and a good guy. It has a good story with anything in it. It can be funny, serious, scary or even epic. You need to have a setting, characters, a plot, a problem and a solution.

In my story I have a funny turtle story. I hope you enjoy.




Part one

 be boom. ( turtle noise ) ̈ what's that dad. ̈
̈ ̈ don't know let's go” Dad said as we walked towards the sound. In the moon    light thro rhe leves of the night forist                                                                                                                 
̈ ̈ oh ok ̈  sound of leaves crunching over their feet ¨where are we going dad¨
 ̈ ̈ to the eggsplosion “ why tho arsking kid  “ you will know very soon “ what's that nose
“ just keep going “
 dad dad!!! “
 just keep  going
“ ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh “
two weeks later“jailed! Jailed! ” over here help” i'm coming my love “ help “ ok “ and
the troll” why the
“ just do it “ok ok “ wheres daniel said the husband
 “ over here said danule “ let go ah what that
 “ it the turtle he said under his breath “ what “ nothing “
ok? “Now lets go “ where are you? ” the tree the tree help
 “ turtle help me plz ( boom” ) done where is he
“ are you talking to me “ no i'm in your head of course i am let's go come on all ready it your son! “Ah ba ok fine “


Chapter two the real power of the terrible!!!!


One year later… 
“ honey “ yes the tertle tered on the oven again
“ really ok i'll tor… yell at him “ ok “  ( whispering ) what are you doing “ i won't food!
 “ you just need to ask that's it man come on now i need to pretend to yell at you man “ just do it now “ ok bad turtle bad turtle  thing that will do it
 “yes it will get me food “ ok man just don't do that again got it your my best friend “ it pretty weird that your best friend is a tertle ;) “ why are you twerking. At the wall “nothing” “ok???” food
“ok ok”
“ now that he's gone yes i did talk to you don't asked surprised im the legendary turtle and spoiler alert the bad comes in 3 2 1 (bang) right on time let go “ help “ turtle” on it kaaa meee haaa meee haaaaaaaaaaaa ( amadgen a turtle on two legs and doing a kaaa meee haaa meee haaa )
“ (in an fbi voce it's not the F.B.I ) what the fuuuuu
“ and back on fore legs there we go “ thanks your welcome “ ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh” what just happened!!!!!” you know it cool when there is 5 ! wow “ you ok “  no im not ok! “ ok back to normal
l “ it ok “  no it's nooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 “ 30 new record “ ah thats loud “ ok im done oh my bleeping bleep
 “ don't do it “ but there there's mmmm oooo rrrr eeee!!!!! “Ok ummm wow ok pew ( bang!!!!!!! Done “ turtle what going on
“ food first “ here “ thank you there bad guys “ and ! there ded
 “ what” bang “ right on time
 “ ok yes but how are they “ QOjcnieeenivfnunz jnzjx “ What did you just say
 “ it a alen “ makes so much sense “ in the know “realy
” what it makes so much sense” I was being sarcastic bird
[=------------- “ how dare you you anamleist “What the hell is animallist “ It's when you when you purposely mistake and animal for another animal or just make fun of an animal because of its look

chapter 3 the gods of the animal kingdom




Are you the king or something?
 “ not even close “ relay “ nooooo of course not i'm the strongest but i'm not the king “dame how is” The lion
 “ really “ yes well let's go “ the palis “ i fort it would be cooler “ i know right the kings in there “ ok…
 “ how dare go there oh hi turtle said the king “ hi
 “ is it the QOjcnieeenivfnunz jnzjx “yes” ok here” thank you” why we at the alien base “ because i'm cool “ ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh



Chapter 4 the end





Ahhhh bang kaboom and off

The end!!!!   

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